2010年5月18日 星期二

2nd draft of Second Life NEWS



Environmental protection has become a popular issue all around the world. In second life, different people and organizations promote the idea of environmental protection without reservation. Green Expo is one of the great achievements which environmentalist have made in Second Life. Green expo displays various analysis of environmental protection on OneClimate Island. The exposition was forged during the 350.org Day of Climate Action (http://www.350.org/), an international campaign that's building a movement to unite the world around solutions to the climate crisis.


(Video clip of 350.org: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s5kg1oOq9tY&feature=player_embedded)

Green Expo is held by a prominent non-profit organization, OneClimate (http://www.oneclimate.net/), which aims at dealing with climate change. As a result, the purpose of the exposition is for boosting eco-friendliness. There are over 25 uniquely crafted exhibition booths from a huge variety of people and organizations, different issues including not only soils, energy, sea, the atmosphere, but the welfare of human beings and animals which related to environmental issues.



Most of people are ignorant of the increasing consumption of fossil fuels, the threatening situation of rare animals, the destruction of the earth’s atmosphere, and so on. Can you imagine how devastating and influential a bottle of coke could be? Visiting Green Expo, and you’ll have a clear sight of the worsening phenomenon that the earth is suffering from.

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M.Y. 提到...
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M.Y. 提到...

This news has potential but needs elaboration.

1. Please take snapshots of some“uniquely crafted exhibition booths"--perhaps three impressive ones--and describe them in details. It would better inform and engage readers if you also interview some visitors or organizers there.

2. You may wish to move the last paragraph to replace the 1st sentence in the 1st paragraph because it is more specific than the general statement in your first sentence.

Quill 提到...

Thank you so much~M.Y.
I'll take your suggestions!
However, I think it's a little bit hard for me to interview with the visitors or organizers in Green Expo...
Every time I go there, there's no people in the exposition...
But I'll try, and it may need some luck!